kathywonder 2008-2-28 00:35
由 Napa 到 St. Helena (Story) ^^
[color=Red][size=4] [size=5][b]我受夠了!![/b][/size]
"我受夠了!! 由第一日你拖着我的手, 上床, 返學, 煮飯, 所有所有, 你幾時有理過我感受...我好攰, think I need a break, please!! Leave me alone, please!!"
女主人翁 --- Sam, 18 歲, 香港留學生, 家中獨女, 父母在年幼時已離異, 之後跟父親雙依維命; 性格豪爽, 有主見, 而且...樣貌標緻. 但卻經常對異性拒人於千里......
今晚, 她再忍受不了, 這個跟他大半年的男孩, 叫 Billy, 大塊頭一個, 20 歲, 只是一個懂得死纏不放的呆子. 哈! 他的 Assignment大部份都是 Sam 教的, 甚至去那裏, 吃什麽, 好唔好打 long D, 甚至......"唔該你擦咗牙先好錫我..." Billy, 就是這樣的一種人.....
"我......我.....Sam, Sam 呀....." "砰!!" 門已關了. 一切都回復平靜.
她走進了浴室, 身上 T shirt, 小短褲也褪下來, 只剩下一副完美似的裸體. 扎起秀髮後, 花洒的水花洒在身上...心裏想着 "攪錯呀, 我竟然到今日才跟他分手, 唉......估唔倒, 我的 Puppy love, 竟然係咁災難...."
Ring....ring..... "Hello!!" Sam 氣急敗壞的由Shower room 走出來, 並聽起電話.
"LA 嗰面天氣點呀? My Sweet Pea??" 一把慈祥的聲音從聽筒傳來. "Daddy" Sam 知道係她父親打來.
"Daddy, 嗚.....鳴..."
...to be continued... [/size] [/color] :P:P
pentree21 2008-2-28 09:08
Thanks. A good starting. Please continue.
kathywonder 2008-2-28 09:12
[quote]原帖由 [i]pentree21[/i] 於 2008-2-28 09:08 發表
Thanks. A good starting. Please continue. [/quote]
A new story made up by myself, hope you enjoy....:P:P
dizzc 2008-2-28 09:17
[quote]原帖由 [i]kathywonder[/i] 於 2008-2-28 09:12 發表
A new story made up by myself, hope you enjoy....:P:P [/quote]
幾時先到你至拿手果part:$:$:P:P:P
kathywonder 2008-2-28 09:38
[quote]原帖由 [i]dizzc[/i] 於 2008-2-28 09:17 發表
幾時先到你至拿手果part:$:$:P:P:P [/quote]
嗰 d 喺我其他thread度睇啦!!
:P:P
mmr.ren 2008-2-28 09:39
[quote]原帖由 [i]kathywonder[/i] 於 2008-2-28 01:38 發表
嗰 d 喺我其他thread度睇啦!!
:P:P [/quote]
so........ :handshake:handshake:handshake:handshake
Condefly2 2008-2-28 09:47
Morning Kathy,
I'm looking forward for your..................Erotica -- sex stories !:jump::jump::jump:
kathywonder 2008-2-28 09:52
[quote]原帖由 [i]Condefly2[/i] 於 2008-2-28 09:47 發表
Morning Kathy,
I'm looking forward for your..................Erotica -- sex stories !:jump::jump::jump: [/quote]
Tks ur support firstly, nut wanna through the story and bring out the point of "Love's all around." and u know Kat's kinda wine lover, wanna make up a story related wine...hope you enjoy anyway...
Kat
Condefly2 2008-2-28 09:58
[quote]原帖由 [i]kathywonder[/i] 於 2008-2-28 09:52 發表
Tks ur support firstly, nut wanna through the story and bring out the point of "Love's all around." and u know Kat's kinda wine lover, wanna make up a story related wine...hope you ... [/quote]
Cheers !
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leicalover 2008-2-28 10:20
Gee... That's a very good story introduction for a love of possibilities. Good atmosphere's, time & place. My only 2 cents is with this phone call from his dad, may be a good part of the story is about history. What about if there's a ring at the door and its the DHL/ Federal Express (usually younger than the normal postman) call? Some more possibilities. Just my thoughts. Yours will be as good as it could be. Cheers.
kathywonder 2008-2-28 20:34
[color=Blue]Chateau Gazin, Pomerol 嘅洒莊, 有種Chocolate, coffee and herbs 嘅味道, Merlot 葡萄. Good!! 後面嗰支睇樽型會係支 Riesling [/color] :verygood::verygood:
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kathywonder 2008-2-28 21:11
[color=Red][size=4]"俾邊個蝦呀, 傻女!!" 一貫慈父的聲音. "冇呀, 冇事嘞! 唔值得為佢唔開心吖." Sam 一貫性格又再浮現. 唔係小姐脾氣, 係不甘心嗰種. 回想起來, Billy是她的第一個男朋友, 即係.....puppy love啦......Sam 憧憬的 puppy love 應該係好 Sweet, 好 passionate 的, 並不是那樣 diasaster 般的. 而且, 她的第一夜是在糊裡糊塗的一夜發生的. 回想起來, 有點可笑𠻹;P;P.
"女女, 女女" Daddy 的聲音令她回到現實. 她不想再回想之前的不快, 不想再回想初夜晚上做愛期間, 枕頭底竟然會有吃剩的Hamburger, 唔想再回想 Billy 如野牛一般的衝刺, 足足令 Sam 痛足 2 天.......等等......還有他那掛在口邊的口頭禪, "阿媽話.".....I'm so sick of it.
"係! Daddy, I'm okay, 我冇唔開心呢! 係喎.....你最近......." 真的, 她真係去 忘 記 他!!![/size][/color]
to be continued......:kiss::kiss:
Condefly2 2008-2-28 21:52
[quote]原帖由 [i]kathywonder[/i] 於 2008-2-28 20:34 發表
Chateau Gazin, Pomerol 嘅洒莊, 有種Chocolate, coffee and herbs 嘅味道, Merlot 葡萄. Good!! 後面嗰支睇樽型會係支 Riesling :verygood::verygood: [/quote]
Kathy,
Very good:verygood::verygood:, I like the Chateau Gazin's unique taste with a mouthful of tobacco (I'm not a smoker :nono::nono:) !
German Riesling is my wife's favorite, with honey tasting.:):)
kathywonder 2008-2-28 22:10
[b][size=4][color=Red]"喂! Sam, Sam, 咪行咁快吖, 等理吖, 喂!!" Judy, 19 歲....同 Sam 一期升上 U 的, Sam 的手帕交, 不過好怕事, 細胆, 有一個細她一年的 Boy friend, Jerry....香港留學生, 家境不甚富裕, 但性格＋分成熟, 心思熟慮. 對 Sam, 一直有一種莫名其妙的觀感, 他不認識 Billy, 亦唔想去識; 但 Sam, 好像一個未開發的寶藏, 但因為 Judy, 所以他把心意一直收藏起來....
"Hey!! Jude!!"
"點呀, 如果問我同 Billy d 嘢, 一句講哂, it's been ended up already, and stop askin' 'bout, pls." Sam 沒氣的回答. "有乜理由, 分手連一個電話, 一個 e-mail 都冇吖!! 就算令朝喺 Hall 度見到, 佢都係擘大個口, 口吃咁唔知講乜咁, 你想我回心轉意, 咁點解你唔同我坦白吖, 我係唔係好討厭吖....." Sam 仍然氣憤不平的
"算啦!! 唔好講 Billy 嘞, Summer 返唔返HK 呀? 我同 Jerry 一齊返渦, 不如一齊啦, 咁咪有個伴囉" Judy 話.[/color][/size][/b]
kathywonder 2008-2-28 22:12
[quote]原帖由 [i]Condefly2[/i] 於 2008-2-28 21:52 發表
Kathy,
Very good:verygood::verygood:, I like the Chateau Gazin's unique taste with a mouthful of tobacco (I'm not a smoker :nono::nono:) !
German Riesling is my wife's favorite, with h ... [/quote]
If you like Riesling, try Leo Bayer, Alsacs, has sort of 荔枝 or 桂花 favor, my first choice, and for sure that ur wife'll love alot.:P:P
阿甘正傳 2008-2-28 22:41
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kathywonder 2008-2-28 23:08
[quote]原帖由 [i]阿甘正傳[/i] 於 2008-2-28 22:45 發表
仲有, 算我孤陋寡聞嘞, Napa我就知道, 但st. helen就唔知囉.:wondering: 可否解識呢? THANK YOU!:bow: [/quote]
Hi!! Forest Gump, you name 阿甘, that's why... Anyway, kathy's just a wine lover but not an expert as you think, but the answer you ask me for...well...I try to give you detail, but not exactly you wanna know, hope you dun mind.:P:P
Napa's what we call Napa Valley in short form in often, 'll see a great plain called Yountville, then move right up North to St. Helena, and the last of Calistoga; if you ask for the greatest wine in Napa, Kathy'll highly recommend Chateau Silver Oak, and a wine names Screaming Eagle (less than 500 cases a year.) and did try once before, so what say, I love Silver Oak, but not Screaming Eagle, cos SE's absolutely expensive.......Enjoy it.
Kat :P:P
chiugor 2008-2-28 23:11
support kat 姐 new story
kathywonder 2008-2-28 23:17
[quote]原帖由 [i]chiugor[/i] 於 2008-2-28 23:11 發表
support kat 姐 new story [/quote]
見你仲未休息, leave u few lines, and thks ur support, and cheer me up by ur inspiration and friend kind support, thks!!
Good night & sleep well!!
Kat:P:P
chiugor 2008-2-28 23:22
nite nite,sweet and wet dream
大冒險家 2008-2-29 09:41
[color=Blue][size=6]K 姐, 查實呢個story係咪你既回憶錄來架 ???[/size][/color]
kathywonder 2008-2-29 09:47
[quote]原帖由 [i]大冒險家[/i] 於 2008-2-29 09:41 發表
K 姐, 查實呢個story係咪你既回憶錄來?[/quote]
Oh!! Splendid, you come quite early dear, how's ur little princess? Well, 呢個唔係我嘅 story, 只係想寫個 story which's related 'bout wine and Napa....新手寫作, 唔好見笑...:P:P
dizzc 2008-2-29 09:49
[quote]原帖由 [i]kathywonder[/i] 於 2008-2-29 09:47 發表
Oh!! Splendid, you come quite early dear, how's ur little princess? Well, 呢個唔係我嘅 story, 只係想寫個 story which's related 'bout wine and Napa....新手寫作, 唔好見笑...:P:P [/quote]
寫開情慾小說想轉形愛情小品呀:lol:lol:lol
大冒險家 2008-2-29 09:50
[quote]原帖由 [i]kathywonder[/i] 於 2008-2-29 09:47 發表
Oh!! Splendid, you come quite early dear, how's ur little princess? Well, 呢個唔係我嘅 story, 只係想寫個 story which's related 'bout wine and Napa....新手寫作, 唔好見笑...:P:P [/quote]
little princess crying for whole night ...:oh::oh::oh:
大冒險家 2008-2-29 09:51
[quote]原帖由 [i]dizzc[/i] 於 2008-2-29 09:49 發表
寫開情慾小說想轉形愛情小品呀:lol:lol:lol [/quote]
no no no ....有性有愛啫....
dizzc 2008-2-29 09:54
[quote]原帖由 [i]大冒險家[/i] 於 2008-2-29 09:50 發表
little princess crying for whole night ...:oh::oh::oh: [/quote]
有咩唔舒服呢? 定係純扭計;P;P;P;P;P
kathywonder 2008-2-29 10:05
[quote]原帖由 [i]dizzc[/i] 於 2008-2-29 09:54 發表
有咩唔舒服呢? 定係純扭計;P;P;P;P;P [/quote]
Crying's a singal and sent the message to parents of what the baby wants. Very normal.:P:P
kathywonder 2008-2-29 10:09
[quote]原帖由 [i]dizzc[/i] 於 2008-2-29 09:54 發表
有咩唔舒服呢? 定係純扭計;P;P;P;P;P [/quote]
And baby cries more, is motivate and make strong the lung circulation; of course, it ahs a bit annoying since baby cry, and that's why parents gotta hold baby all the times.:P:P
電腦奇俠 2008-2-29 23:44
K姐, 又出新書, 不如寫你同羊咩 d咩咩嘢仲好啦.:lol:lol:lol
阿甘正傳 2008-3-1 10:30
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kathywonder 2008-3-7 18:16
[b][color=Red][size=4]X 月 X 日, 晴
等如我嘅心情一樣, 學曉要習慣沒有男友的日子, 雖知 Billy 只係我人生的中途站, 不是終站; 為何要令自己不開心呢!! 我是否今生今世都要依附着一個電腦奇俠, 電車男呢!! 他今晚有打過電話來, 這兩日亦 send 咗無數嘅道歉 e-mail, SMS, 甚至乎...在我 apartment 門外有一山扎的玫瑰花.....懇求我原諒. 懇求........我並沒有要求他給我什麽的 assurance, 只是想彼此有多一點空間. 而且, 愛...不是佔有!
"搞錯呀!! 又 send 錯我 mail box 度!! 點派信㗎..." Sam不耐煩的說着. Sap 的一聲!! "Wine Country Tour Shuttle ------ Inique tours in Napa Valley......." Napa Valley.......Sam 心底裏泛着一點好奇, 只記起...未到外國讀書之前, 父親許多時都會拿着洒杯, 細味的品嘗這 Dark Ruby 色的洒液, 他臉上並不其然泛起一絲滿意的笑容. 呀!! 客廳有一個係裝着上三百個酒塞的 Glassy container. Daddy 係一個對飲食, 對工作, 對任何人都很細心的人. 有時會想着, 為何 Daddy 這樣的人, 竟然身邊沒有伴侶的呢?? 唔通.......呀!! He's not kinda foggot....No, no, no!!!! 我 daddy 應該係鍾意女人嘅......."
唉...佢又胡思亂想呢! 雙子座的女性, 通常...性格都是這樣的...
...to be continued......
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jackwine 2008-3-8 12:04
Humm..a story from Napa, make sure there is a 'hot' sensory aftertaste, don't mind with a little bit sweet, hey, keep the story going...thanks
電腦奇俠 2008-3-9 11:53
X 月 X 日, 晴
等如我嘅心情一樣, 學曉要習慣沒有男友的日子, 雖知 Billy 只係我人生的中途站, 不是終站; 為何要令自己不開心呢!! 我是否今生今世都要依附着一個電腦奇俠, 電車男呢!! 他今晚有打過電話來, 這兩日亦 send 咗無數嘅道歉 e-mail, SMS, 甚至乎...在我 apartment 門外有一山扎的玫瑰花.....懇求我原諒. 懇求........我並沒有要求他給我什麽的 assurance, 只是想彼此有多一點空間. 而且, 愛...不是佔有!
"搞錯呀!! 又 send 錯我 mail box 度!! 點派信㗎..." Sam不耐煩的說着. Sap 的一聲!! "Wine Country Tour Shuttle ------ Inique tours in Napa Valley......." Napa Valley.......Sam 心底裏泛着一點好奇, 只記起...未到外國讀書之前, 父親許多時都會拿着洒杯, 細味的品嘗這 Dark Ruby 色的洒液, 他臉上並不其然泛起一絲滿意的笑容. 呀!! 客廳有一個係裝着上三百個酒塞的 Glassy container. Daddy 係一個對飲食, 對工作, 對任何人都很細心的人. 有時會想着, 為何 Daddy 這樣的人, 竟然身邊沒有伴侶的呢?? 唔通.......呀!! He's not kinda foggot....No, no, no!!!! 我 daddy 應該係鍾意女人嘅......."
唉...佢又胡思亂想呢! 雙子座的女性, 通常...性格都是這樣的...
...to be continued......
[color=Blue]阿 Kat姐, 又乜解究又囉我電仔.....唉! 要收版權嘞. 禾邊'鼠'係電車男呀??[/color] :Q:Q:Q:Q:Q:Q
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leicalover 2008-3-10 09:37
Thank you. Red text reappearing again.
I always envy people with such creativeness. The world is really blessed in a way that there is no one common taste. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder.
dizzc 2008-3-10 09:42
[quote]原帖由 [i]leicalover[/i] 於 2008-3-10 09:37 發表
Thank you. Red text reappearing again.
I always envy people with such creativeness. The world is really blessed in a way that there is no one common taste. Beauty is in the eyes of the behol ... [/quote]
你都知佢創意無限喇, 佢老作.....丫唔係.....作左好多野啦:lol:lol:lol:lol:P
leicalover 2008-3-10 11:17
Really like your icon... the laughing cat!
dizzc 2008-3-10 11:24
[quote]原帖由 [i]leicalover[/i] 於 2008-3-10 11:17 發表
Really like your icon... the laughing cat! [/quote]
yeah, sony cat, he s naugty n cute:lol:lol:lol:lol:lol
你都搵番個頭像啦
leicalover 2008-3-10 12:16
Done. Find myself a frog. Something getting harder to find here in Hong Kong.
peterluk 2008-3-10 13:50
估唔到竟然有女士會中意紅酒, 難得, 難得. :verygood: 加油.
peterluk 2008-3-10 16:56
[quote]原帖由 [i]kathywonder[/i] 於 2008-2-28 20:34 發表
Chateau Gazin, Pomerol 嘅洒莊, 有種Chocolate, coffee and herbs 嘅味道, Merlot 葡萄. Good!! 後面嗰支睇樽型會係支 Riesling :verygood::verygood: [/quote]
果然有研究, good. 其實Pomerol哋區只係一個較少產量嘅產區, 但竟然出咗 Petrus 這經典,有一所叫 La Croix de Gay 亦都係本人心水之選. 你呢篇文嘅topic, Napa to St Helena, 有機會嘅話可以試吓,Chateau Montelina, Calistoga. Excellent. 有機會可以喺呢度同其他人研究研究.
電腦奇俠 2008-3-10 17:05
hey, peterluk, are you hacker, or not???????
dizzc 2008-3-10 17:33
[quote]原帖由 [i]電腦奇俠[/i] 於 2008-3-10 17:05 發表
hey, peterluk, are you hacker, or not??????? [/quote]
就算係真既會有人認嗎
peterluk 2008-3-10 18:29
[quote]原帖由 [i]電腦奇俠[/i] 於 2008-3-10 17:05 發表
hey, peterluk, are you hacker, or not??????? [/quote]
儍啦, 我都係悶悶地上嚟, 點知睇到Napa 同 St Helena 同Wine 有關嘅嘢,好奇走上嚟啫, 如果唔歡迎唔緊要嘅.
peterluk 2008-3-10 18:30
多口問嘞, 點解會話我係黑客嘅?
電腦奇俠 2008-3-10 23:03
[quote]原帖由 [i]peterluk[/i] 於 2008-3-10 18:30 發表
多口問嘞, 點解會話我係黑客嘅? [/quote]
冇,多口問句姐, 矛嘢, 矛嘢,enjoy 啦.
peterluk 2008-3-13 14:14
近排飲左支 mountmary, 1996. 睇吓對你篇story有冇幫助?
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