pigone 2008-5-7 22:57
請問以下句子, 用在商業文函可以嗎?
our priority is to continue providing you a high-quality services.
謝謝
gwaimuilover 2008-5-8 03:28
Try this: our priority is to continue to provide you with high-quality services.
pigone 2008-5-9 21:53
gwaimuilover,
thank you for yr suggestion.
It's great that I can learn from you.
tomatohead 2008-5-11 23:50
This will work too,
"our priority is to continue providing you with high-quality services."
hacker_hacker 2008-5-12 07:30
our priority is to continue to provide you with high-quality services
saltiwet 2008-5-12 21:57
try re-construct the sentence with "consistency" and "your satisfaction my priority"
Let our consistency in providing high quality service be your satisfaction my priority.
大周 2008-5-31 18:36
回復 #6 saltiwet 的帖子
The structure is too complex......
I think the original sentence is good enough.
saltiwet 2008-6-1 00:04
[quote]原帖由 [i]大周[/i] 於 2008-5-31 18:36 發表
The structure is too complex......
I think the original sentence is good enough. [/quote]
冇錯, 我都覺得寫比華人睇係複雜左. 寫比鬼佬睇, 以上咁多句都說服力不夠.
香港人的英文用太多 is, am, was, were, would be. will be, 來作動詞. 所以我的英文老師要我們盡量用多一點別的動詞去組織句子.
[[i] 本帖最後由 saltiwet 於 2008-6-1 19:47 編輯 [/i]]