hong211 2007-3-25 10:15
英文功課!!help~!!
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Today I had an interesting day ! this morning . I go for a walk before breakfast.As I was
walking along the beach I a scream - ' Stop thief ! ' Everybody turned to look , and I
saw that a man running towards me . I didn't know what to do . Suddenly , he ran into
a some scaffolding and fell over . Silly man ! The police caught him easily.
I had breakfast with my friends on the hotel balcony after my walk . While we was eating
, it sudddenly started to rainy very heavily . It was really stormy so we got drenched .
we all stayed at the hotel listening to the weather forecast the radio . However , the rain didn't last long - it only rained 11.30 a.m. . The hotel manager told us that the weather in Thailand was always unpredict .
In the afternoon , we want to a floating market . It much bigger than Chinese markets .
It was very hot and humidity while we werethere . Even though I hadn't liked getting
drenched in the morning . I really wanted it to rain while we were exploring to the market!
I think I would rather be wet and cool than too hot temperature .
In the evening . we decide to go for a seafood meal - the hotel restaurant offers half - price meals 7 p.m. and 8 p.m. Unfortunately , the waters were very rude . When we arrived , they told us said the restaurant was full , although I was sure I could see some
empty tables . Another waiter was smoke too . We went to McDonald ' s for dinner instead ! Well , bye for now Aaron . I ' ll calling you when I get home
hong211 2007-3-25 10:26
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百佳889 2007-4-1 07:03
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Today I had an interesting day! I went for a walk before breakfast.As I was
walking along the beach and I screamed " Stop thief ! ". Everybody turned to look , and I saw a man running towards me. I didn't know what to do . Suddenly , he ran into a scaffolding field and felt over. Silly man ! The police caught him easily.
I had breakfast with my friends in the hotel balcony after my walk. While we were eating, it sudddenly started to rainy very heavily . It was really stormy so we got drenched. We all stayed at the hotel listening to the weather forecast from radio. However , the rain didn't last long - it only rained til 11.30 a.m. . The hotel manager told us that the weather in Thailand was always unpredictable.
In the afternoon , we went to a floating market . It was much bigger than Chinese markets. It was very hot and humidity while we were there . Even though I havn't liked getting drenched in the morning . I really wanted it to rain while we were exploring to the market! I think I would rather be wet and cool than the hot temperature .
In the evening, we decide to go for a seafood meal. The hotel restaurant offered half price meals from 7 p.m. and 8 p.m. Unfortunately , the water were very rude . When we arrived , they told us that the restaurant was full , althoughI was sure I could see some empty tables . Another waiter was smoking too. We went to McDonald ' s for dinner instead ! Well , see you for now Aaron . I ' ll call you when I get home.