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今日招職提出幾個香港成日犯的港式英文,入嚟大家參詳吓!

今日招職提出幾個香港成日犯的港式英文,入嚟大家參詳吓!

Our shops should be on sale.

Our price is cheap.

The problem was improved.

We received a complaining letter yesterday.

Because of this reason, I would like to propose a change in our pricing scheme.

內文指出以上五句都係錯誤的英文,也是港人常出現的問題句子!
不如大家留吓言,表達吓你哋會點改正以上句子吖∼∼
我冇Model Answer,我只想大家討論個答案應該係點∼∼
大田英明,身為版主,你不如身先士卒,講吓你會點改正以上句子吖∼∼

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啱唔啱都交流吓啦∼∼
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原帖由 無神論狂徒 於 2009-7-3 18:05 發表
Our shops should be on sale.
Our price is cheap.
The problem was improved.
We received a complaining letter yesterday.
Because of this reason, I would like to propose a change in our prici ...
Our shops should be on sale. - 呢題我估on sale係指貨品,如果佢咁寫,可以被解作我們啲店舖平價發售,講梗成間舖出售∼∼即係幾千萬一間咁賣!

Our price is cheap. - Price係low,唔係cheap

The problem was improved. - 我估係The problem improved.,唔洗被動式∼

We received a complaining letter yesterday. - 好明顯唔係complaining,complain letter仲算好少少∼∼,最正宗應該係letter of complaint。鬼佬唔會用complaint letter,因為習慣問題∼∼你講complaint letter,老外會明白,但佢哋唔會咁講∼∼

Because of this reason, I would like to propose a change in our prici - 呢個應該係個Conjunction用法太中文化∼∼應該用在兩句Clause中間∼∼句子一開始用Conjunction,盡管老外明白你講乜,但係屬於poor english∼∼

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