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由 Napa 到 St. Helena (Story) ^^

  我受夠了!!

"我受夠了!! 由第一日你拖着我的手, 上床, 返學, 煮飯, 所有所有, 你幾時有理過我感受...我好攰, think I need a break, please!!  Leave me alone, please!!"

女主人翁 --- Sam, 18 歲, 香港留學生, 家中獨女, 父母在年幼時已離異, 之後跟父親雙依維命; 性格豪爽, 有主見, 而且...樣貌標緻. 但卻經常對異性拒人於千里......

今晚, 她再忍受不了, 這個跟他大半年的男孩, 叫 Billy, 大塊頭一個, 20 歲, 只是一個懂得死纏不放的呆子.  哈! 他的 Assignment大部份都是 Sam 教的, 甚至去那裏, 吃什麽, 好唔好打 long D, 甚至......"唔該你擦咗牙先好錫我..." Billy, 就是這樣的一種人.....

"我......我.....Sam, Sam 呀....."  "砰!!" 門已關了.  一切都回復平靜.

她走進了浴室, 身上 T shirt, 小短褲也褪下來, 只剩下一副完美似的裸體. 扎起秀髮後, 花洒的水花洒在身上...心裏想着 "攪錯呀, 我竟然到今日才跟他分手, 唉......估唔倒, 我的 Puppy love, 竟然係咁災難...."

Ring....ring..... "Hello!!" Sam 氣急敗壞的由Shower room 走出來, 並聽起電話.

"LA 嗰面天氣點呀? My Sweet Pea??"  一把慈祥的聲音從聽筒傳來. "Daddy" Sam 知道係她父親打來.

"Daddy, 嗚.....鳴..."

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Thanks. A good starting. Please continue.

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Thanks. A good starting. Please continue.

A new story made up by myself, hope you enjoy....

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A new story made up by myself, hope you enjoy....

幾時先到你至拿手果part

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幾時先到你至拿手果part

嗰 d 喺我其他thread度睇啦!!

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嗰 d 喺我其他thread度睇啦!!

so........

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7^# 大中小發表於 2008-2-28 09:47 只看該作者

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Morning Kathy,
I'm looking forward for your..................Erotica -- sex stories !

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原帖由 Condefly2 於 2008-2-28 09:47 發表
Morning Kathy,
I'm looking forward for your..................Erotica -- sex stories !

Tks ur support firstly, nut wanna through the story and bring out the point of "Love's all around." and u know Kat's kinda wine lover, wanna make up a story related wine...hope you enjoy anyway...

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原帖由 kathywonder 於 2008-2-28 09:52 發表

Tks ur support firstly, nut wanna through the story and bring out the point of "Love's all around." and u know Kat's kinda wine lover, wanna make up a story related wine...hope you ...

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Gee... That's a very good story introduction for a love of possibilities. Good atmosphere's, time & place. My only 2 cents is with this phone call from his dad, may be a good part of the story is about history. What about if there's a ring at the door and its the DHL/ Federal Express (usually younger than the normal postman) call? Some more possibilities. Just my thoughts. Yours will be as good as it could be. Cheers.

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Chateau Gazin, Pomerol 嘅洒莊, 有種Chocolate, coffee and herbs 嘅味道, Merlot 葡萄. Good!! 後面嗰支睇樽型會係支 Riesling

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"俾邊個蝦呀, 傻女!!" 一貫慈父的聲音. "冇呀, 冇事嘞! 唔值得為佢唔開心吖." Sam 一貫性格又再浮現. 唔係小姐脾氣, 係不甘心嗰種. 回想起來, Billy是她的第一個男朋友, 即係.....puppy love啦......Sam 憧憬的 puppy love 應該係好 Sweet, 好 passionate 的, 並不是那樣 diasaster 般的. 而且, 她的第一夜是在糊裡糊塗的一夜發生的. 回想起來, 有點可笑𠻹

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"女女, 女女" Daddy 的聲音令她回到現實. 她不想再回想之前的不快, 不想再回想初夜晚上做愛期間, 枕頭底竟然會有吃剩的Hamburger, 唔想再回想 Billy 如野牛一般的衝刺, 足足令 Sam 痛足 2 天.......等等......還有他那掛在口邊的口頭禪, "阿媽話.".....I'm so sick of it.

"係! Daddy, I'm okay, 我冇唔開心呢! 係喎.....你最近......." 真的, 她真係去忘記他!!!

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原帖由 kathywonder 於 2008-2-28 20:34 發表
Chateau Gazin, Pomerol 嘅洒莊, 有種Chocolate, coffee and herbs 嘅味道, Merlot 葡萄. Good!! 後面嗰支睇樽型會係支 Riesling

Kathy,

Very good

, I like the Chateau Gazin's unique taste with a mouthful of tobacco (I'm not a smoker

) !

German Riesling is my wife's favorite, with honey tasting.

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"喂! Sam, Sam, 咪行咁快吖, 等理吖, 喂!!" Judy, 19 歲....同 Sam 一期升上 U 的, Sam 的手帕交, 不過好怕事, 細胆, 有一個細她一年的 Boy friend, Jerry....香港留學生, 家境不甚富裕, 但性格＋分成熟, 心思熟慮. 對 Sam, 一直有一種莫名其妙的觀感, 他不認識 Billy, 亦唔想去識; 但 Sam, 好像一個未開發的寶藏, 但因為 Judy, 所以他把心意一直收藏起來....

"Hey!! Jude!!"

"點呀, 如果問我同 Billy d 嘢, 一句講哂, it's been ended up already, and stop askin' 'bout, pls." Sam 沒氣的回答. "有乜理由, 分手連一個電話, 一個 e-mail 都冇吖!! 就算令朝喺 Hall 度見到, 佢都係擘大個口, 口吃咁唔知講乜咁, 你想我回心轉意, 咁點解你唔同我坦白吖, 我係唔係好討厭吖....." Sam 仍然氣憤不平的

"算啦!! 唔好講 Billy 嘞, Summer 返唔返HK 呀? 我同 Jerry 一齊返渦, 不如一齊啦, 咁咪有個伴囉" Judy 話.

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Kathy,

Very good, I like the Chateau Gazin's unique taste with a mouthful of tobacco (I'm not a smoker ) !

German Riesling is my wife's favorite, with h ...

If you like Riesling, try Leo Bayer, Alsacs, has sort of 荔枝 or 桂花 favor, my first choice, and for sure that ur wife'll love alot.

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原帖由 阿甘正傳 於 2008-2-28 22:45 發表
仲有, 算我孤陋寡聞嘞, Napa我就知道, 但st. helen就唔知囉. 可否解識呢? THANK YOU!

Hi!! Forest Gump, you name 阿甘, that's why... Anyway, kathy's just a wine lover but not an expert as you think, but the answer you ask me for...well...I try to give you detail, but not exactly you wanna know, hope you dun mind.

Napa's what we call Napa Valley in short form in often, 'll see a great plain called Yountville, then move right up North to St. Helena, and the last of Calistoga; if you ask for the greatest wine in Napa, Kathy'll highly recommend Chateau Silver Oak, and a wine names Screaming Eagle (less than 500 cases a year.) and did try once before, so what say, I love Silver Oak, but not Screaming Eagle, cos SE's absolutely expensive.......Enjoy it.

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見你仲未休息, leave u few lines, and thks ur support, and cheer me up by ur inspiration and friend kind support, thks!!

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K 姐, 查實呢個story係咪你既回憶錄來架 ???

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K 姐, 查實呢個story係咪你既回憶錄來?

Oh!! Splendid, you come quite early dear, how's ur little princess? Well, 呢個唔係我嘅 story, 只係想寫個 story which's related 'bout wine and Napa....新手寫作, 唔好見笑...

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Oh!! Splendid, you come quite early dear, how's ur little princess? Well, 呢個唔係我嘅 story, 只係想寫個 story which's related 'bout wine and Napa....新手寫作, 唔好見笑...

寫開情慾小說想轉形愛情小品呀

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Oh!! Splendid, you come quite early dear, how's ur little princess? Well, 呢個唔係我嘅 story, 只係想寫個 story which's related 'bout wine and Napa....新手寫作, 唔好見笑...

little princess crying for whole night ...

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