our priority is to continue providing you a high-quality services.

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Try this:  our priority is to continue to provide you with high-quality services.

gwaimuilover,
thank you for yr suggestion.

It's great that I can learn from you.

This will work too,

"our priority is to continue providing you with high-quality services."

our priority is to continue to provide you with high-quality services

try re-construct the sentence with "consistency" and "your satisfaction my priority"

Let our consistency in providing high quality service be your satisfaction my priority.

The structure is too complex......
I think the original sentence is good enough.

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原帖由 大周 於 2008-5-31 18:36 發表
The structure is too complex......
I think the original sentence is good enough.

冇錯, 我都覺得寫比華人睇係複雜左. 寫比鬼佬睇, 以上咁多句都說服力不夠.

香港人的英文用太多 is, am, was, were, would be. will be, 來作動詞. 所以我的英文老師要我們盡量用多一點別的動詞去組織句子.

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