<---英語NEW的作文 希望大家幫忙看看文法什麼的有沒有錯0.0

我08年中5畢業  英文0分其他都還可以
然後自修了一段時間  就是看看書可沒做什麼練習
然後報了最後一年會考  希望盡最後一點努力....
所以希望有人可以幫我評評作文當作實習一下 囧

以下是我好久之前看完一段短文然後用那些不懂的字作的一篇短文
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    Tom is a international business general manager. He earn muh money every year but
he had always thrown caution to the wind. His money always parted faster than he earn.
    Tom had a hobby, he like to invent something instrument. although all of those were
worthless. But he still very enjoy that. Actaully he spend all the time on his invention.
Even he had been said that "If I win the lottery, I must spend all money to make a great
thing!"
    Moreover, when Tom was done a invention he always spree the weekend at a expensive club
with his friends.
    That is probably why Tom always went through his money.

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