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標題: [疑難] 請問以下句子, 用在商業文函可以嗎? [打印本頁]

作者: pigone 時間: 2008-5-7 22:57 標題: 請問以下句子, 用在商業文函可以嗎?

our priority is to continue providing you a high-quality services.

謝謝

作者: gwaimuilover 時間: 2008-5-8 03:28

Try this: our priority is to continue to provide you with high-quality services.

作者: pigone 時間: 2008-5-9 21:53

gwaimuilover,
thank you for yr suggestion.

It's great that I can learn from you.

作者: tomatohead 時間: 2008-5-11 23:50

This will work too,

"our priority is to continue providing you with high-quality services."

作者: hacker_hacker 時間: 2008-5-12 07:30

our priority is to continue to provide you with high-quality services

作者: saltiwet 時間: 2008-5-12 21:57

try re-construct the sentence with "consistency" and "your satisfaction my priority"

Let our consistency in providing high quality service be your satisfaction my priority.

作者: 大周 時間: 2008-5-31 18:36 標題: 回復 #6 saltiwet 的帖子

The structure is too complex......
I think the original sentence is good enough.

作者: saltiwet 時間: 2008-6-1 00:04

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原帖由大周於 2008-5-31 18:36 發表
The structure is too complex......
I think the original sentence is good enough.

冇錯, 我都覺得寫比華人睇係複雜左. 寫比鬼佬睇, 以上咁多句都說服力不夠.

香港人的英文用太多 is, am, was, were, would be. will be, 來作動詞. 所以我的英文老師要我們盡量用多一點別的動詞去組織句子.

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