原帖由 saltiwet 於 2008-5-15 09:45 發表
試下作:
John 在地下鐵站和兩個人吵架, 結果被其中一人用刀當場刺死.
原帖由 saltiwet 於 2008-5-18 05:34 發表
An altercation between John and two men broke out in the MTR station. John was stabbed by one of the men and died instantly.
我寫得好中文化. 希望有高人指點一下.
原帖由 saltiwet 於 2008-5-18 21:35 發表
我本來想咁樣寫的.
John died instantly from a single stab wound following an altercation with two men at the mtr station.
好似少了 knife 呢個字:
咁樣寫又如何?
John died instantly from a ...
原帖由 saltiwet 於 2008-5-21 13:02 發表
John died instantly from a single stab wound that was inflicted by a knife following an altercation with two men at the mtr station.
原帖由 結他手 於 2008-5-25 12:59 發表
由於去年公司業績不理想, 今年除了不加薪之外, 還有可能向某些部門進行重組及裁員."
It is because for the turnover is worsen last year, not only the salary will be fixed but also reorganisation ...
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