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作者: 無神論狂徒 時間: 2009-7-3 18:05 標題: 今日招職提出幾個香港成日犯的港式英文，入嚟大家參詳吓！

Our shops should be on sale.

Our price is cheap.

The problem was improved.

We received a complaining letter yesterday.

Because of this reason, I would like to propose a change in our pricing scheme.

內文指出以上五句都係錯誤的英文，也是港人常出現的問題句子！
不如大家留吓言，表達吓你哋會點改正以上句子吖～～
我冇Model Answer，我只想大家討論個答案應該係點～～
大田英明，身為版主，你不如身先士卒，講吓你會點改正以上句子吖～～

作者: 無神論狂徒 時間: 2009-7-4 19:46

冇人識?
玩怕羞呀？
啱唔啱都交流吓啦～～
留言講講啦～～

作者: 無神論狂徒 時間: 2009-7-11 18:13

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原帖由 無神論狂徒 於 2009-7-3 18:05 發表
Our shops should be on sale.
Our price is cheap.
The problem was improved.
We received a complaining letter yesterday.
Because of this reason, I would like to propose a change in our prici ...

Our shops should be on sale. - 呢題我估on sale係指貨品，如果佢咁寫，可以被解作我們啲店舖平價發售，講梗成間舖出售～～即係幾千萬一間咁賣！

Our price is cheap. - Price係low，唔係cheap

The problem was improved. - 我估係The problem improved.，唔洗被動式～

We received a complaining letter yesterday. - 好明顯唔係complaining，complain letter仲算好少少～～，最正宗應該係letter of complaint。鬼佬唔會用complaint letter，因為習慣問題～～你講complaint letter，老外會明白，但佢哋唔會咁講～～

Because of this reason, I would like to propose a change in our prici - 呢個應該係個Conjunction用法太中文化～～應該用在兩句Clause中間～～句子一開始用Conjunction，盡管老外明白你講乜，但係屬於poor english～～

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