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作者: dogdog911 時間: 2007-5-13 21:08 標題: 经典英文爱情诗

经典英文爱情诗. Without you?I'd be a soul without a purpose.
Without you?I'd be an emotion without a heart
I'm a face without expression,A heart with no beat.
Without you by my side,I'm just a flame without the 没有你？我将是一个没有目的的灵魂；没有你？我的情感将没有了根基；我将是一张没有表情的脸；一颗停止跳动的心；没有你在我身边；我只是一束没有热量的火焰。

2经典英文爱情诗. If you were a teardrop;In my eye,
For fear of losing you,I would never cry
And if the golden sun,Should cease to shine its light,
Just one smile from you,Would make my whole world bright
译文:
如果你是我眼里的;一滴泪;为了不失去你;我将永不哭泣;如果金色的阳光;停止了它耀眼的光芒;你的一个微笑;将照亮我的整个世界。

作者: tswilliam 時間: 2007-5-28 23:17 標題: Fantastic....

Lovely and fantastic enough...

作者: ricky6262858591 時間: 2007-5-29 22:18

very good,and that is what i am looking for

作者: mi822 時間: 2007-5-31 22:21

`emotion without the heart` in english really isn`t preferable, but good enough la~ ^-^ I love the rest of the poem~

作者: adrenaline 時間: 2007-6-5 05:18

thanks very much

作者: beyondgege 時間: 2007-6-7 19:37

It is very very beautifu lThanks alot

作者: 190794 時間: 2007-6-12 20:32

May I correct "Without you by my side,Im just a flame without heat"? However,it's a good poem indeed.

作者: clarence.li28 時間: 2007-6-29 19:18 標題: English poem

The beauty in the eye of the beholder

作者: p25912197 時間: 2007-7-2 11:05

我改天找篇
莎士比亞
的情詩

那才是高明

作者: timetutor 時間: 2007-7-2 12:30

莎士比亞的情詩的確是歷久不衰...
套用在現今社會一樣好精警
只是讀原文有點難
有註釋才行

不過我覺得用modern english寫成的情詩,也可以很有味道的
我以前就讀過一首係講middle-aged couple打tennis的
首詩用40同love呢兩個字語帶雙關
最衰唔見左
如果唔係share俾大家

作者: hongkongfree123 時間: 2007-7-10 15:20

i can use this to coax my girl friend

作者: gunnerlee 時間: 2007-7-17 22:49

Shall I compare thy to the sammer's day.......

作者: iloveykj 時間: 2007-7-20 11:15

admire~that's great!

作者: luckydraw 時間: 2007-7-30 23:10

Beautiful. I'll try it with my girlfriend.

作者: happyness2007 時間: 2007-9-22 01:45

thank you , good poem , may be i will tell my girl

作者: gayxesh 時間: 2007-9-30 09:08

wonderful love songs.

my favorite is the sentence below:

Jus one smile from you would make my whole world bright.

作者: princess_f 時間: 2007-10-1 11:10

Say that in Paris, she is going to marry you right away!

作者: bb_sky_bb 時間: 2007-10-9 21:45

GOOD~~~~~~~~~~

作者: dlaw8212a 時間: 2007-10-10 08:51

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作者: badboy888 時間: 2007-10-17 08:43

very good thanks for sharing.

作者: zimp12 時間: 2008-1-15 19:51

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