試下作:
John 在地下鐵站和兩個人吵架, 結果被其中一人用刀當場刺死.


如果反應好, 就會多出一點新題目. 希望可以幫大家作句時會用鬼佬的思考方式

An altercation between John and two men broke out in the MTR station. John was stabbed by one of the men and died instantly.

我寫得好中文化. 希望有高人指點一下.

我本來想咁樣寫的.

John died instantly from a single stab wound following an altercation with two men at the mtr station.

好似少了 knife 呢個字:

咁樣寫又如何?

John died instantly from a single stab knife wound following an altercation with two men at the mtr station.

John died instantly from a single stab wound that was inflicted by a knife following an altercation with two men at the mtr station.

睇黎可以出過別一個題目.

"由於去年公司業績不理想, 今年除了不加薪之外, 還有可能向某些部門進行重組及裁員."

我都覺得長左d. 不過內容就唔係太多.

今日問個仔, 佢話 "John died instantly from a single stab wound following an altercation with two men at the mtr station." 就明白. stab attack 就暗示了是刀.

John was arguing with two people at the MTR station, and was stabbed to death by one of them using a knife.

An altercation between John and two men broke out at the MTR station. John was stabbed by one of the men and died instantly.

John died instantly from a single stab wound following an altercation with two men at the mtr station.

That an altercation between John and two men at the MTR station escalated into a fatal stab to John.

John was fatally stab and died at the scene as a result of an altercation with two men at MTR station.

歡迎各位朋友試下用不同的字和句式作句. 唔係想搵那一句最好, 是希望搵多些變化.

"由於去年公司業績不理想, 今年除了不加薪之外, 還有可能向某些部門進行重組及裁員."

It is because for the turnover is worsen last year, not only the salary will be fixed but also
reorganization and manpower reduction will be operated next.

Owing to the poor corporate business achievement last year, the restructuring and the manpower reduction to certain departments will probably be implemented apart from no salary increment for this year.

The annual report shows the company has failed to achieve a satisfactory business performance last year. All annual pay rise and performance review will be suspended until the completion of the restructuring on some poor performed departments.

對不起, 我是先寫好英文再翻中文. 我原作的那一句是一個美麗謊言, 希望留下的人的士氣不會受打擊, 所以給他們有渺茫的加薪希望. Restructuring 包含了縮水裁員的意思, 所以 redundancy就省略了.

[ 本帖最後由 saltiwet 於 2008-5-27 06:38 編輯 ]

今個星期簡單一些: 我私車子十分耗油

1. my car has high running cost on fuel.

[ 本帖最後由 saltiwet 於 2008-6-4 21:09 編輯 ]