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原帖由 saltiwet 於 2008-5-15 09:45 發表
試下作:
John 在地下鐵站和兩個人吵架, 結果被其中一人用刀當場刺死.

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原帖由 saltiwet 於 2008-5-18 05:34 發表
An altercation between John and two men broke out in the MTR station. John was stabbed by one of the men and died instantly.

我寫得好中文化. 希望有高人指點一下.

John was arguing with two people at the MTR station, and was stabbed to death by one of them using a knife.

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原帖由 saltiwet 於 2008-5-18 21:35 發表
我本來想咁樣寫的.

John died instantly from a single stab wound following an altercation with two men at the mtr station.

好似少了 knife 呢個字:

咁樣寫又如何?

John died instantly from a  ...

The original Chinese sentence did not indicate that he died from a single stab wound.

If "knife" is to be used, try "from a single stab wound inflicted by a knife".